Sunday, March 06, 2011

I am sick :(

Crawling in my skin
These wounds, they will not heal
Fear is how I fall
Confusing what is real

There's something inside me that pulls beneath the surface
Consuming, confusing
This lack of self control I fear is never ending
Controlling

I can't seem
To find myself again
My walls are closing in
(Without a sense of confidence I’m convinced that there’s just too much pressure to take)
I've felt this way before
So insecure

Discomfort, endlessly has pulled itself upon me
Distracting, reacting
Against my will I stand beside my own reflection
It's haunting how I can't seem...

8 comments:

  1. Hey What happened to you?
    Hope you are fine. Just stay put. Things will become fine.
    Take care

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  2. very meaningful insights,said with sincerity.
    cheers.
    if anything troubling I am always there.

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  3. Long time since I came here :)

    This 'poem' almost sounds like a Linkin Park song. Reminded me of "Crawling" somehow.

    Get well soon :)

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  4. Kya hua aapko??? so very unlike u yaar....

    take care man....stuff happens:)

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  5. hey yaar, what happ? R u alright? come online some time ...and plz take care

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  6. Hey, hope you are alright. Take care!

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  7. Hey...this poem seems depressing, but at the same time I like it as a work of art because it feels raw, and therefore seems to depict true emotion.

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